I gave my first AG brew a proper tasting last night, and it was not what I was hoping for. This is the American Amber Ale recipe that I posted in the recipe forum previously.
8.0# Pale Malt (2 Row) - US
1.5# Caramel/Crystal Malt -45L
1.0# Munich Malt 10L
0.5# Melanoidin Malt
0.5# Cara-Pils
0.66 oz Centennial Hops (60 min)
0.66 oz Centennial Hops (15 min)
0.67 oz Centennial Hops (2 min)
1/2 tsp Irish Moss (10 min)
1 California Ale Yeast (WLP-001)
I do not think the problem is the recipe, but I'd appreciate any thoughts & pointers from those who have tread this road before me.

The beer is just 25 days in the bottle, primed with 3/4cup corn sugar for the 5 gallon batch. So yes, young, but here is what I observed. Color was a real nice medium amber, slighly hazey. Carbonation was gentle and good. Head was thin & lacey, but persisted atop the mug all the way down. Aroma was not strong at all, with only a thin hint of malty, perhaps a tang of pine. Mouthfeel was astringent, and taste was uninspired initially, and bitter grapefruit/rind at the end and aftertaste.
Not a great beer.

1 - Fermentation tempature was not controlled well. I pitched at 75-F, and stored in an interior bathroom. Ambient temp stayed at 75 or so, but the thermometer strip on the outside of my plastic bucket fermenter read 78+ during active fermentation. I have since bought a portable room AC and should be able to keep a 65-F ambient for future batches.
2 - I batched sparge 1 time with 3.5 gallons @ 168-F, pouring in to stir up the grain bed well. I let it set for 15 minutes, then drained to the boil pot. I did not know to vorlauf the sparge, so it went straight in. I know that astringency can definitely come from a bad sparge technique. Thoughts?
3 - I am not convinced I had good temp control during the mash. I used a strike temp of 166-F, look for a single infusion step at 154-F. Using a kettle analog themometer, clipped along the inner side, I thought my mash was too hot, so added some cool water and stirred a few minutes to 154. Put the lid on, and checked again in 20 mins... read 150-F. So I waited another 15 mins, and added 2 qt. of sparge water to heat it up, stirred and got back to 154. And waited 30 mins to drain. In my AG#2 batch, I used the instant read digital thermoter from the center of the mash, and found it much hotter in the center than the edges (naturally huh!) so I wonder if I was too hot in AG#1?
I hope this is not a bore to everyone. I tried to keep it brief & concise. I am here to learn, and I really want to make great tasting beer!

Am I on the right track? Other things that you may suggest are appreciated greatly!

==LexusChris